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One day, she went to the seashore to find some seashells that could be picked up and put into a basket. She ended up with a whole basketful. Later at home, she took the shells out and put them onto the dinette table. With some jeweler's tools, she pierced holes in the shells and put them on small gold and silver chains. She ended up making twenty of them that she sold for ten dollars apiece. Her profit added up to one hundred and seventy five dollars. She used the money to go to the shore again, but now she could afford to stay for a whole week.